When an unexpected pregnancy strikes, the daunting task of starting a new life leaves a 17 year old girl to face the extreme choices her past has presented.
How are you going to make your script different than every other teen drama where there is a pregnant girl? Seems overdone, but I'm sure you will be able to make it unique.
1. I think that this logline presents a very real situation that people go through. I hope you do well at showing that pregnancy at a young age is not glamourous. It does tell a story and intrigue the reader to how the girl will handle her conflict, and how she will overcome (or if she will at all). It makes me curious to see what the extreme choices will be presented.
The story sounds like it is going to bring about a lot of controversy, which will help the story continue going. Yes, it may be similar to every other teen pregnancy drama but as long as the details and daily struggles are different from other shows, this should be fine. I want to read on to find out how the unfortunate girl will manage.
How are you going to make your script different than every other teen drama where there is a pregnant girl? Seems overdone, but I'm sure you will be able to make it unique.
ReplyDeleteShe could make it into a "teen pregnacy drama" musical
DeleteOverall its very intreging. You go girl, follow your heart and other inspirational anecdotes.
ReplyDelete1. I think that this logline presents a very real situation that people go through. I hope you do well at showing that pregnancy at a young age is not glamourous. It does tell a story and intrigue the reader to how the girl will handle her conflict, and how she will overcome (or if she will at all). It makes me curious to see what the extreme choices will be presented.
ReplyDeleteThe story sounds like it is going to bring about a lot of controversy, which will help the story continue going. Yes, it may be similar to every other teen pregnancy drama but as long as the details and daily struggles are different from other shows, this should be fine. I want to read on to find out how the unfortunate girl will manage.
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